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PostSubject: Koudojin   Koudojin I_icon_minitimeSun May 02, 2010 12:10 pm

Name of Weapon or Item: Koudojin [Earth Blade]
Owner: Yoshimaru Kangai
Location: On the back
Rank: A [Poison is B ranked]
Description/Abilities: The ancient sword carries a type of natural, dry liquids on the edge of the blade. Whenever the edge of the blade cuts the opponent, the cut is instantly infected with the dry liquid. The opponent shortly is starting to have symptoms of the odd poison, such as fatique, nausea, weakness of muscles, and dizziness. It takes one post for the poison to take effect after Yoshimaru had made the wound on the opponent [Instantly], 4 posts while IN effect, and 3 for it to be out. It all basically depends on who gets effected by it and how much power it takes for the opponent to stay focused and continue to fight. Whoever weilds this weapon that is not a Kangai, will have sharp spikes come out of the handle, much like Kisame's sword. Chakra is able to freely run throughout the sword, giving it an extra few inches or so which is able to cut the enemy more accurately.

History: From the way the sword looks, it is to be said to be very old, maybe about 80 years of age, possibly more. Yoshimaru obtained this weapon from searching around Konoha, and into the Kangai clan's area. He was able to fix it up some and experiment with it alittle to see how it worked. He has had it for a few years and uses it in almost every battle he has. Yoshimaru assumes it used to belong to his great grandfather, but who made it and how, is currently unknown. Although it may have some old Celtic writing on the blade, it is to be illegible due to the fact that no one he knows is able to read such ancient writing.

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PostSubject: Re: Koudojin   Koudojin I_icon_minitimeSat May 08, 2010 6:45 pm

I'm not exactly sure but I think poison is only for Medical Ninja (Or those they give it too)

Also, your weapon seems more like an A Rank.
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PostSubject: Re: Koudojin   Koudojin I_icon_minitimeSun May 09, 2010 11:30 am

Since I use plantlife, I can gather multiple different poisons from different plants, and make them myself o-o"
and I changed the rank, then.
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PostSubject: Re: Koudojin   Koudojin I_icon_minitimeSun May 09, 2010 12:15 pm

It needs to be re-worded, it's hard to understand most of the abilities save for the regular nausea and such.
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PostSubject: Re: Koudojin   Koudojin I_icon_minitimeSun May 09, 2010 12:24 pm

I reworded it.
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PostSubject: Re: Koudojin   Koudojin I_icon_minitimeSun May 09, 2010 12:34 pm

You need to add in how long the poison would take to take effect and how long it actual does take effect until it wears off as well as the rank of the poison.
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PostSubject: Re: Koudojin   Koudojin I_icon_minitimeSun May 09, 2010 12:47 pm

Done
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PostSubject: Re: Koudojin   Koudojin I_icon_minitimeSun May 09, 2010 12:50 pm

Quote :
4 posts while IN effect, and 3 for it to be out.

I'm having a little trouble understanding what this means. like what happens between the 4 & the 3 posts?
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PostSubject: Re: Koudojin   Koudojin I_icon_minitimeSun May 09, 2010 12:57 pm

1st post <- cut, poison takes effect slowly
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1st post ] - in effect
2nd post ] - in effect
3rd post ] - in effect
4th post ] - in effect
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1st post ] - wearing off
2nd post ] - wearing off
3rd post ] - back to normal
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the last section basically depends on the type of person. some people could get over this illness easier than others.
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PostSubject: Re: Koudojin   Koudojin I_icon_minitimeSun May 09, 2010 2:02 pm

So, basically, the last section is a weaker version?
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PostSubject: Re: Koudojin   Koudojin I_icon_minitimeSun May 09, 2010 3:42 pm

The last section is when it starts wearing off and the opponent goes back to normal
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PostSubject: Re: Koudojin   Koudojin I_icon_minitimeSun May 09, 2010 6:16 pm

A little iffy but approved unless said otherwise
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PostSubject: Re: Koudojin   Koudojin I_icon_minitimeMon Aug 16, 2010 2:35 pm

Achived due to the wielder being dead....
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