Saib & Aoitori's Equpiment

Completed I think. -waits for a review-



[Yeah I know... I still gotta do Aoitori's NPC profile but ehhh I'll get to it eventually.]

You actually have to put some sort of rank on your weapons

Ehh fine. Done.

Approved.

I have moved this because I do see some errors... I will get to this soon, just not now

Okay, the rank of any weapon needs to be B-ranked or higher if it conducts chakra. Also since the first weapon you posted is unbreakable.... the rank should start out at around A-rank. The conducting chakra thing applys to all of your weapons/items here.

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The sword has no special characteristics other than being able to be imbued with elemental chakra/chakra itself. Asides from that, this sword is generally unbreakable due to being made from rather durable material.

This is totally unacceptable by my standards. If it is A-ranked weapon or higher... The description needs to be much longer, and so does the history...though it isn't nearly as important. What do you mean by imbued with elemental chakra/chakra itself. What does that do for the weapon? Is there anything special that one can do with it? How does one activate it? How much chakra does it take to activate it? Does it have any drawbacks or weaknesses?

Now to the next weapon

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Aokakesu is able to be imbued with elemental chakra and is also hard to break.

What do you mean it is hard to break? Is it on the level of unbreakable? And what do you mean imbued with elemental chakra?

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Additionally, when charged with just regular chakra and set into the ground Aokakesu can create a defensive barrier in a six feet radius around it above ground.

How much chakra are we talking? A B-rank, a C-rank?????

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Aoitori may charge it up with lightning based chakra and create a defensive barrier that has lightning based properties

Again, how much chakra are we talking? Up to what rank will it deflect/defend against attacks?

Another question about this barrier. <.< Does it act as a one way barrier meaning people from the inside can let out and attack on the people one the outside while the people one the inside are defended, or is it simply a two way barrier where one cannot attack the outside, and the people on the inside attack the outside?

Now to the next thing

Okay from what I understand, your NPC character that this armour stuff is for has Raiton, but from what I see it has some abilities that are asociated with fuuton, like gliding and increased jumping in the air. I am hesitant to allows these at all in armour that a raiton NPC is going to use. So, I must ask you to delete said ability.

When you say protection.... What do you mean... Is the character protected from the blunt of blows, from external damages? And a C-rank amount of chakra to activate this for 7 posts. It would be okay for it to simply deflect normal projectile weapons, but anything more and something needs to be cut.

From the rest... I think it is all okay.

Ade ade, I know the rankings need changing since we have new rules...

Anyway whenever I say "imbued with chakra" I mean that they can conduct chakra... Its just a different word choice with the same meaning...


Aokakesu
"Hard to break" No, not indestructable, just requires a little more force than with regular weapons.

Defensive Barrier
Chakra Required: C [Thus the ranking of the weapon when I first made it BEFORE the weapon rules were added.]
Rank Deflection: "The barrier is capable of deflecting all normal weapons (not enhanced with chakra or anything of the sorts) and most C Rank techniques."
Lightning Barrier: "Meaning that it will be weak against wind attacks and its defensive capabilities will only increase if lightning is used against it. And that if anyone were idiotic enough to touch it, they'd be momentarily paralyzed for that post and that post only."
Entry: If you're inside, you're stuck inside. If you're outside, you're stuck outside unless you break through the barrier or attack from below.

Armor
Flight: The armor isn't normal and doesn't require wind natured chakra to keep it aloft, merely a chakra source. (The reason why I used the term 'glide' rather than 'fly' since he can't actually control where he's going.) A C Rank amount of chakra is needed to initate it and keeps him aloft using current/natural air patterns/currents/etc. thus the reason why he can only be gliding in the air for 3 posts, but asides from that, during the other 4 posts these wings can be used for defensive purposes rather than for 'flight' since they're generally the only parts of his armor that can move. And of course, it means there's a one post cool down before he can use it to glide again during his total seven posts. And yes, it would be dependent on the current weather if he can glide or not and since we have a weather system in place its rather hard to God-Mod favorable winds IC wise.

Protection: Since its made out of the same material... its protection is the same as that of his body armor, following the same rules.

Anyway, I'll go ahead and make the needed Rank changes...

Reapproved