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PostSubject: Ravot's Jutsu   Ravot's Jutsu I_icon_minitimeTue Jun 15, 2010 4:34 pm

Name of Jutsu: Lightning Cuffs
Rank: C
Users: Ravot
Type of Jutsu:: Ninjutsu
Element Affinity: Lightning
Training Link:
Description: Ravot form rings of lightning from his hand which he then shoot it towards his opponents that attach to an opponents wrists and ankles then send 500 volts of electricity through their body. Once they attach to a opponent's body they last about 2 min (one post). This jutsu is weak against c-rank wind type jutsu or any jutsu that is higher ranking than it. It travel 50 meters.

Name of Jutsu: Lightning bolt
Rank: C
Users: Ravot
Type of Jutsu:: Ninjutsu
Element Affinity: Lightning
Training Link:
Description: Ravot focus his chakra to his fingertips or anything metal and release a bolt of lightning from that point towards his oppenent it send 500 volts of electricity through the opponents body paralyzing them for a few minutes (about one post). This jutsu is weak against any c-ranked wind type jutsu or any jutsu higher than it, but this jutsu become strong when it comes in contact with water or metal and travels about 110 meters

Name of Jutsu: Lightning Clone
Rank: C
Users: Ravot
Type of Jutsu:: Ninjutsu
Element Affinity: Lightning
Training Link:
Description: Ravot focus chakra all around his body, increasing the amount of chakra through out his bo and create a clone of him. Except when someone attacks the clone. The clone release 700 volts of electricity through the wound or about one meter outward, into the opponent body causing them to be paralyzed for a few minutes (about one post). This jutsu is weak against c-ranked wind jutsu or any jutsu higher ranking than it.


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PostSubject: Re: Ravot's Jutsu   Ravot's Jutsu I_icon_minitimeTue Jun 15, 2010 6:49 pm

Please remove the academy jutsu they do not need to be posted.
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PostSubject: Re: Ravot's Jutsu   Ravot's Jutsu I_icon_minitimeSat Jun 19, 2010 7:20 pm

All the jutsu descriptions need to be lengthened and more specific.

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At least one solid paragraph detailing what this technique does and what its weaknesses are. (Roughly five sentences with five words per sentence.) If it is only a few lines your jutsus will not be seriously looked at as they can be extremely vague.
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PostSubject: Re: Ravot's Jutsu   Ravot's Jutsu I_icon_minitimeThu Jun 24, 2010 2:53 am

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PostSubject: Re: Ravot's Jutsu   Ravot's Jutsu I_icon_minitimeTue Jun 29, 2010 1:57 am

Name of Jutsu: Lightning Cuffs
Rank: C
Users: Ravot
Type of Jutsu:: Ninjutsu
Element Affinity: Lightning
Training Link:
Description: Ravot form rings of lightning from his hand which he then shoot it towards his opponents that attach to an opponents wrists and ankles then send 1000 volts of electricity through their body, plus they act like magnets and attract the enemy to anything metal. This jutsu is weak against c-rank wind type jutsu or any jutsu that is higher ranking than it.


I'd like to know more about this jutsu. How far can the jutsu travel? Does it continue to shock after being attached? Is it easily dodged and how can it be avoided? How many turns does it last or is it continuously sustained? Just things like that.

Also, being shocked and attracted to metal things seems much above C rank to me. A at least. Either dim it down or get rid of the attracted to metal bit.

Drop voltage to 500-700. 500 will get it closer to being approved as C rank, fyi.

Name of Jutsu: Lightning bolt
Rank: C
Users: Ravot
Type of Jutsu:: Ninjutsu
Element Affinity: Lightning
Training Link:
Description: Ravot focus his chakra to his fingertips or anything metal and release a bolt of lightning from that point towards his oppenent it send 1000 volts of electricity through the opponents body paralyzing them for a few minutes (about one post). This jutsu is weak against any c-ranked wind type jutsu or any jutsu higher than it, but this jutsu become strong when it comes in contact with water or metal


How far does this travel?

Drop voltage to 700.


Name of Jutsu: Lightning Clone
Rank: C
Users: Ravot
Type of Jutsu:: Ninjutsu
Element Affinity: Lightning
Training Link:
Description: Ravot focus chakra all around his body, increasing the amount of chakra through out his bo and create a clone of him. Except when someone attacks the clone. The clone release 1000 volts of electricity through the wound into the opponent body causing them to be paralyzed for a few minutes (about one post). This jutsu is weak against c-ranked wind jutsu or any jutsu higher ranking than it.


Drop voltage to 700

How far outward does the electricity go?
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PostSubject: Re: Ravot's Jutsu   Ravot's Jutsu I_icon_minitimeTue Jun 29, 2010 5:06 pm

To answer your question about the lightning cuffs. They travel about 50 meters and yes they continue to shock after being attached. It can be dodge easily or the opponent can throw something metal at it and it'll attract to it. it last one post, and i drop the voltage to 500. your question for the other technique have been answered in my edited post.....edited
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PostSubject: Re: Ravot's Jutsu   Ravot's Jutsu I_icon_minitimeTue Jun 29, 2010 5:31 pm

Edit the middle one to say what the range is.

I've decided that your first one cannot be C rank as long as the metal attraction is there. You can take out the metal attraction and make the voltage 700 and it be C, but you could easily just use this and flick a kunai without them being able to do anything about it.
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PostSubject: Re: Ravot's Jutsu   Ravot's Jutsu I_icon_minitimeThu Jul 01, 2010 4:35 am

I edited again and took out the metal attraction
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