Youmu's techniques

C ranked

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D ranked

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yay... bump.

Name of Jutsu: Fuusochi (Wind Step)
Rank: C
Users: -
Type of Jutsu:: Ninjutsu
Element Affinity: Fuuton
Description: User focuses wind chakra around their body and especially legs, which allows them to move in sudden speed bursts. If used correctly it would look like disappearing and reappearing. This technique can also be used passively to keep characters speed slightly increased all the time. User shouldn't dash with this technique through burning areas because of Wind's natural weakness against Fire.


This sounds like the shushin tech to me. No.

Name of Jutsu: Flash Mind
Rank: C
Users: Fuusoku
Type of Jutsu:: Doujutsu/Supplementary
Element Affinity: -
Description: User focuses some chakra into their brain to unlock greater levels of brain wave frequency which allows user to think much faster, read much faster and if used to max level it would allow user to see things moving up to speed of light. Requires active Harangan. Tires brain after use.

This is way above C level. Speed of light is far from C

Chakra tate is using pure chakra to block attacks. That is beyond D rank.

Add more detail to chakra senbon.

Your breath of hell thing sounds B rank to me.

Shadow figure sounds B rank, as well.

Mind protective wall can only block up to D rank genjutsu because it is D rank and must be used before the genjutsu is used.

Your last jutsu is A ranked.

TNT wrote:

This sounds like the shushin tech to me. No.

My bad, no disappearing reappearing. Anyway, I think body flicker is not accepted, but I cant find a rule that makes it not allowed.

TNT wrote:

Name of Jutsu: Flash Mind
Rank: C
Users: Fuusoku
Type of Jutsu:: Doujutsu/Supplementary
Element Affinity: -
Description: User focuses some chakra into their brain to unlock greater levels of brain wave frequency which allows user to think much faster, read much faster and if used to max level it would allow user to see things moving up to speed of light. Requires active Harangan. Tires brain after use.

This is way above C level. Speed of light is far from C

I will simply delete this, since its my clan technique and my kkg is having major changes.

TNT wrote:

Chakra tate is using pure chakra to block attacks. That is beyond D rank.

Why are you thinking it's pure chakra? Did I say it's pure chanka in description? In my opinion pura chakra is something of A-S rank and something I've only seen a Bijuu to do, no way Genin could do that. This technique is a minor version of Kikou Junpuu - Light Shield Seal Mechanism, which was used by Chiyo against Sasori/Sandainme Kazekage, the original technique is reserved for puppeteers and it's B ranked, but much more powerful, capable of stopping Iron Sand techniques, which is (like half of stuff in leafninja) of unknown rank. Still, if this technique really seams somewhat OP to you, then I think I can lower defence by one rank... blocking D and partially blocking C.

TNT wrote:

Your breath of hell thing sounds B rank to me.

Are you referring Poison Mist used by Shizune, which is B ranked? Well, it's because it has poison in it automatically, my technique basically only reduces visibility and removes smells if I don't use poison with it. But alright, I'll increase rank by one, being it C ranked technique and B if used with poison.

TNT wrote:

Shadow figure sounds B rank, as well.

Well, I don't like that "sounds like" thing, but I'll remove increased speed and evasion, leaving only movement sound effect.

TNT wrote:

Mind protective wall can only block up to D rank genjutsu because it is D rank and must be used before the genjutsu is used.

Alright, blocking up to rank D, but I'd still like to keep noticing up to rank of B, or at least C. And its common sense to use a shield before you're stabbed, not when you're already bleeding.

TNT wrote:

Your last jutsu is A ranked.

I'll just remove this like Flash Mind.

Would those changes be ok with you?

bump

Name of Jutsu: Jigoku Enka no Ibuki (Breath of Hell's smoke)
Rank: C
Users: -
Type of Jutsu:: Ninjutsu
Element Affinity: -
Description: After performing correct hand signs and focusing chakra in their throat user exhales a smokescreen that covers everything in 20m radius reducing visibility in the area nearly to zero and eliminating any trace of scent there might have been. The smoke can also contain poison, but then it would be ranked B.


Could you elaborate more on exactly how it takes away all traces of the user's scent from the battlefield? Assuming you did mean just the user's scent

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