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Alekzaunder Jounin
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| Subject: Alekzaunder Haidenissui [Chuunin | Kumogakure] Mon Jul 26, 2010 8:13 pm | |
| Name: Alekzaunder "Alekz" Haidenissui Nickname/Alias: Sir Alekzaunder Full name: Alekzaunder Beauregard Sebastian Liborion [Only known to very few] Age: 21 Age Appearance: 25 Appearance: - Spoiler:
Gender: Male Skill Level: B Ninja Rank: Chuunin Village: Kumogakure Birthplace: Konohagakure Previous Village: Clan/Bloodline: Haidenissui | HydroElectricity Personality: Alekzaunder is very cool, calm, and collected. He usually spends all his time in his house, alone, and studying almost any book he can get his hands on. He is very talented and takes pride in what he does and what he had learned. Being talented in many ways such as his intillectual knowledge, jutsu skill, and electric/water elements. On the inside, he's accually very kind, sweet, and gentle. To some strangers, he could seem uptight and arrogant. To his friends, which know him very well, they see the real Alekz unlike most people do. He's practically emotionally blocked and is very good at hiding his feelings. He has a soft spot for young children, due to his infertality in which he was born with, he was unable to have children for himself. Previously before his leave from Konoha to Kumo, he had been best friends with Yoshimaru Kangai. He was about only five years old when he had departed from the village. Since then, him and Yoshimaru had always stayed in contact via mail. Ever since then, after years, he was always dedicated into being best friends with this man. Goals: N/A Alignment: Neutral Canon Personality: Hyuuga Neji Skill Specialty: Ninjutsu, Medical Dominant: Ninjutsu Recessive: Medical Elemental Affinity: Water, Lightning Dominant: Lightning Recessive: Water History: 0 - 5 - Spoiler:
Alekzaunder was born in Konoha. His mother and father were two very well known shinobi; his father was an official jounin, serving the village by fighting and going on missions. His mother worked full time at the hospital as a medical ninja, and a nurse, sometimes being able to go on missions with other shinobi to aide them in battle with her medical jutsu. His father was the one that usually took care of him whenever his mother was gone on work shift. Although, he was an infant at the time, he was still a smart baby, according to his father. The boy was showing signs of his bloodline already at such a small age.
By the time Alekz was a toddler, his father had gotten a job at the Academy, and put him in it as the daycare program. Of course there, Alekzaunder would befriend many of his friends he has today, such as Yoshimaru, but that didnt happen until later in his life.
Around his age at 5, Alekzaunder had befriended Yoshimaru, and since then, they had always been best friends and throughout his hard times. They learned a lot of things together as friends. They had gone to the academy together and wrote eachother letters on days that they couldnt see eachother, or played together. As kids, they had made a promise to always be friends no matter what, and they still are.
5 - 10 - Spoiler:
Alekzaunder's parents began to have a financial problem as they lived in Konohagakure. The prices for the rent, water bill, and electricity had gone up by a lot in the past few years. They had decided not to tell Alekz to worry him, but soon enough, they had a talk with the Hokage about leaving and going to another country in order to live there. It took a while but they had packed up and ordered a carriage to drive them out of the country safely and to get to Kumogakure.
The last time that Alekz got to see Yoshimaru was the day before they had to leave, and the young boy had given him a special necklace in memorance of their friendship. A day later, the boy and his parents set out to leave Konoha forever, as Alekzaunder continued to write to his friend.
It long until the family had gotten to Kumogakure, registered to become a resident and shinobi, and got a house they could afford. Ever since the move, the young Alekzaunder had changed and became a new person. The wild, hyperactive boy that his parents had known had now gone silent and calm. It was a dirastic change, probably due to the move, and he never went back to his old self. Ofcourse, from this change, he began to read a lot on his free time, and didnt play with other kids of his age that were wanting to become shinobi.
At age 10, Alekzaunder had joined the academy. He had no problem with Clone jutsu and replacement jutsu, and many other courses that the Academy had tought him. He would stay after class and read in the library, usually getting home just for dinner time, and go straight to the library in their house and continue to read and gain up his knowledge. On other spare times, he would train with his father anytime he would get the chance. Training with his father unlocked the ability to control lightning within his hands. Small sparks were always to be seen with this technique that he was taught.
10 - 15 - Spoiler:
First year of Academy: Alekzaunder had his ups and downs with learning some jutsu, which was chakra controlling. He was able to somewhat always use chakra in the form of lightning with his father, but his father never really taught him how to control it out side of his body completely. Like Naruto, Alekz had to train harder and harder to focus his chakra and make it swirl around his body. It took about two months, but Alekz was able to do it. Although, he was getting better and better at it and the harder he tried, the better he was at chakra control.
Second year of Academy: Training with chakra built him up the courage in order to make a clone. This was something he would always use no matter what the situation was. His first clone seemed to look like a dud, and the second on was just made out of air. It took him quite some time to focus his chakra in some different ways in order to preform the clone technique, but he got the hand of it thanks to his teacher and father. On the 12th try, Alekzaunder finally got it and made a fully functional clone. His chakra control came in handy once again. But, there was always the henge technique, which Alekz had no problem with.
Third year of Academy: It was time for Alekzaunder to learn some attacking moves from his teacher in the academy. Well, so he thought. The class was taken outside and part of the class was being taught how to walk on water, and the other half on tree's. Every month, the class would switch positions. Alekzaunder's great chakra control helped him learn these two techniques quite quicker than the other students, which were falling repeatively. Months have passed and Alekzaunder was quite fond with these two walking techniques, and then he went on to learn how to activate tags, and how to escape rope bindings with many different ties and knots.
Fourth year of Academy: This year was very different from the rest. Most of the time through the year, Alekzaunder and the rest of the class was taking tests about what they have learned through the three years of their lives in the Academy. Some of the time, they were also taking notes, training in the gym's with eachother, and improving the skills they already knew. Alekzaunder on the other hand, had been training some of his lightning and suiton elements whenever the academy teachers werent paying much attention. His father had also been training him on his free time through the past years, helping him gain better chakra control and speed. It was a quick year, and time had flown by very easly and so smoothely, that Alekzaunder passed the Academy and was a genin in no time.
Alekzaunder was a genin now, and his father thought it was time to finally train him a bit more, and push him a bit harder. This was going to be an intense year as Alekzaunder was a genin. Using certain training methods, such as attempting to slice a lead using lightning in one hand, and move a water droplet in the other, Alekzaunder was learning very quickly. It was astounding how he learned so quick. It was possible that he, could have been, a child genius.
After months of training with his father, Alekzaunder was able to send lightning through waves of water and oceans of water. It was quite easy for him, seeing as the chakra inside of him consisted of those two elements he posessed. Of course over time, Alekzaunder had read up on his clan's history and their jutsu's in books that his father had bought him, or in books that were from their ancestors.
Alekzaunder used his time in order to work on his lightning and water skills as he waited for a sensei. At this point in his life, he was beginning to train harder and become better at his skills. It wasnt long until he could practically control lightning itself. Being able to shoot out small lightning bolts from his hands and fingers. Of course he trained this on a daily basis, along with chakra control and continuing to try his best at water jutsu. Seeing as water was his weakpoint, he decided to try working on Hydroelectric jutsu.
It wasnt until a few more months have passed by, and Alekz had completed the Chuunin exams with flying colours at age 15. He was pretty young, but he had what it took to rank up higher. It was then his goal to become a jounin, and take up higher opportunities. He would do whatever it took to rank up and meet his goals in life. He never did get a sensei, so he was okay emotionally and physically, since most chuunin would miss their sensei's once they ranked up one. His father was like a sensei to him, so he gained all the things that sensei's usually taught their students.
Alekzaunder was a growing boy and his skills were growing as well. His mother had become a certified doctor in Kumogakure and was respected almost world widely with almost every country. His mother would usually travel to Konoha every now and then, and take Alekz with him, letting him see his long life best friend. Although with his mother's advanced medical jutsu, she had taught Alekz a thing or two about medical chakra and medical jutsu. This helped Alekz heal his wounds in battle, and study up in the library about it.
Alekzaunder was beginning to have great chakra control, lightning control, water control, and medical control as well. Although, Alekz father wanted to experiment on him, thinking that he could take one step ahead of everyone else and have what no one else did in Kumogakure. His father had talked it over with his mother, as his mother took in Alekz in the hospital and put him up to have surgery in his hands and arms. This surgery was to put vents and holes in his finger tips and one in the palm of both hands. Although, Alekz was already able to use small lightning bolts already, but this would make him use further and more dangerous attacks.
During the surgery, the nurses, along with his mother, had started working on both his hands at once. They had opened up his fingers and a small hole in the palm of both hands. The holes were laced with a metal ring, holding them open. It would bleed for a while during the surgery, but that would eventually stop. The holes were embedded in the chakra system/current in the fingers and arm. This would help him freely flow chakra out of his fingers, to help with his medical chakra, and as well as pretty dangerous lightning bolts. Of course he would need years of training with this type of surgery on his fingers.
16 - 21 - Spoiler:
It took atleast a year and a few months for Alekzaunder to train with his surgical improvement on his hands. It took a lot of power to not accidently shoot anyone with a lightning bolt, but Alekz manage to pull it off. He would normally wear gloves in order to protect his hands and other people for that matter. The gloves had a negative plate in the palm and in the finger tips, which caused any lightning to accidenlty shoot out, not to. Although, having the chakra sometimes slip out of his fingers, he had controlled it to where it would either stay on his hands or go back inside of his fingers, sucking it back in.
At the age of 17, he was able to have a pretty good chakra control, and able to sense chakra without using his eyes. This type of training caused him to risk his life a few times. His father had put him inside a forest at night time every night for a few months, and made him follow his father out of the forest, using nothing but chakra sensorship. Alekzaunder had a hard time doing this, but it worked very well and he was able to do it with his eyes closed even at night and day. It gave him the advantage in battles if the person was hiding.
Near his 18th birthday, Alekzaunder had gotten into a sparring battle with another Kumogakure ninja. This ninja specified in Katon jutsu, which wouldnt be too hard for Alekz. The battle started out with Alekz having the upper hand with his lightning usage. The water techniques that he had used was to extinguish the flames that the enemy had projected at him, which would become tiring to Alekzaunder, seeing as he wasnt very used to using them. Although near the end of the battle, the Kumogakure ninja had gotten Alekzaunder weak enough, where the opponent had gotten up close to him and thrusted a large, and massive flame at Alekzaunders face. Only using one usable arm, Alekz had protected his left eye as his right eye was scorched, burned, seered, and caused a second to almost third degree burn to his eyeball as well and skin.
Being rushed to the hospital immediantly by the opponent, Alekzaunder was rushed inside the emergancy room and was treated the moment he was in there. Much of the skin was burnt off, deep down to the muscle. His eye ball was also very damaged, having to almost loose sight in it, lucky enough to be seeing just no colour and blurry. There was no medical jutsu that could ever repair such damage to the skin and muscle, and even the eye. Alekzaunder survived the surgical proceedures that he had to go through, and was released out of the hospital after a week or so after rehabilitating in the room. The right side of his face was completely hidious, as he felt insecure with going out in public ever again, so he resorted to making a mask with a small slit in it for the eye, in which he could see out of. His eyesight is perfect in his left eye, but with his right eye open, it causes him to get dizzy, confused, and nausious from the results of having both of them open.
Years of training with this new eye led him to be at the age of 20, and his training paid off very well. His balance was almost perfect again as he stood completely still on poles, as a training proceedure. It was almost like he had perfect vision once again, before the incident. His jutsu's were perfected to where he had almost mastered the Raiton Kaika as well. It seemed to be very easy for him to just simply shoot out lightning bolts, but even better when he added a handsign to it, making it even more dangerous lightning bolts.
Skipping to the age of 21, Alekzaunder now lives a normal life with his foster son, Yoshidoku. Due to his best friends death, Yoshimaru, he had taken in his son, to call his own. Alekzaunder was infertile, meaning he was inable to have kids himself. This was a great opportunity to raise Yoshido as his own son, but he knows that Yoshimaru will always come first in the young boys life. RP Sample: - Spoiler:
It was probably the worst idea for Yoshimaru to back himself into the corner with a clone. But either way, there was always atleast one way to get out of a situation. To him, nothing was impossible, as long as he could find a way. But sometimes, he couldnt get out of situations, like the one he was in now. As soon as Yoshimaru had made his clone, Faust had already had some sort of summoned creature by his side. It looked like a man-crow hybrid, and it looked fierce. Although, there was nothing to be afraid of, but right now, Yoshimaru was terrified from the inside out. This could be the last moment he will ever see daylight again.
Out of the smoke, the two figures became clearer to Yoshimaru. The birdman was large, and even more ferocious than he had been in the smoke. Faust had the look on his face to kill and destroy. Although, Yoshimaru, emotionless, he was shaking. He was shaking on the inside as well, but he had to hide that fear from Faust. He had to show him he wasnt scared, but that was practically impossible. With sudden actions, the two men spoke in a unison. It was the same jutsu he had used on him the first time, except now, it was stronger. There wasnt much Yoshimaru and his clone could do now that the flock of crows were larger in number and thicker as well to get out. Virtually, there was no escape, but it wasnt too late, and it never is too late to survive.
There wasnt a sign of light anywhere around Yoshimaru, but his eyes quickly adjusted to the darkness. He could see shapes of crows. 'Gotta do something really quick...' Yoshimaru thought and his clone turned his back to the flock of crows and looked right at Yoshimaru. Both of them put their arm out at one another. Bursting out of the Clone's left arm, and Yoshimaru's right arm, a large dragon head, and scaled body shot out and wrapped around Yoshimaru's body, covering him exept his left arm. The act was quickly thought of, and would protect him from any explosions of any sort. The clone's earth dragon had wrapped itself around Yoshimaru's earth dragon, causing a large, 3 foot thick wall of wrapped earth, stone, and rock materialized dragon around Yoshimaru.
After the quick Jutsu had Faust, Naito, and the three clones had stepped into the ever so darkness void of crows. A large explosion coming from the three clones had broken a few inches of the dragon extention around Yoshimaru, the skin of the dragon cracking and crumbling. The head of the two dragons quickly spun their heads from left to right, and spewed out mud in order to counter the flames, extinguishing most of it so none more would harm the cracked and somewhat faulted first foot of the extended dragon which was still wrapped around Yoshimaru's body. But the clone couldnt survive the large explosion and was burnt, which led for it to turn into complete wood, unable to be used.
After the large explosion caused by the clones, Naito had thrusted many sharp feathers down onto Yoshimaru's covered body. From the explosions great force, atleast one to the second layer of three layers of the dragon had been cracked and hardly shattered. But, due to the sharp feathers, it penetrated the cracked earth and caused it to shatter and crumble down. There was atleast one foot left, and that was the last layer of earth surrounding Yoshimaru. The sharp feather projectiles continued to come reigning down on him, and the earth dragon was holding up pretty well but barely. Yoshimaru had to think quick in order to get out of this situation, but that would be a tough one. His free hand, which was out of the large dragon extention mistakingly had gotten a bit scortched. His whole body had already been earthlike and since Earth was not easly to be burned, this time he had been lucky.
The projectiles kept coming, and some of them had gotten through gaps in the earth dragon exention, causing the feathers to hit Yoshimaru, but in the places like legs and his forearms. The rest of his body was protected by his Hashirama armour, but that wouldnt stand so much of the projectiles for long. Yoshimaru made a slight gap where his mouth was and made a handsign, put his burned fist up to the hole and shot out one more dragon extention that had bursted outwards at Faust, attempting to knock him out of the flock of crows.
Special Characteristics: Skill: - Spoiler:
Chakra Control: These users have excellent chakra control, which means they waste little chakra in battle. People with excellent chakra control usually have average or below average chakra. Since the amount of chakra is smaller, it is easier to master control over it. People with this skill are like, Itachi, Kakakshi and Orochimaru.
Elemental: Rank: B This skill gives the user excellent elemental control and a wide variety of uses for the element. Most people with this skill can master an element of their choice and will use it like none other. People with this skill are, Kakuzu, Nidaime Hokage and Asuma.
Mental: - Spoiler:
Eidetic memory: Characters with this trait are able to recall memories with extreme accuracy, rarely do they forget information.
Custom: - Spoiler:
Name: Raiton Manipulation - Surgically Proceeded Rank: A/S Type: Skill Description: From Alekzaunder's surgerical proceedure when he was a teenager, he was able to freely flow chakra out of his fingertips and his palm from small holes, turning it into lightning. After many years of training with this new ability, he was able to perfect it to its best. Although, it is very easy to lose a great amount of chakra with this type of surgery. Requires jutsu to utilize this SC. Open: Yes [Surgically by Alekz/Others]
D- - Power = Weak - Amount = 10% of Chakra - Effects = Stun/Shock - Used for attacks [All] C- - Power = Quite Effective - Amount = 15% of Chakra - Effects = Stun/Shock/Burn B- - Power = Powerful - Amount = 20 % of Chakra - Effects = Stun/Shock/Burn/Penetrate A- - Power = Descructful - Amount = 25% of Chakra - Effects = Stun/Shock/Burn/Penetrate S- - Power = Lethal - Amount = 45 % of Chakra - Effects = Stun/Shock/Burn/Penetrate/Destroy
Name: Genius Rank: - Type: Mental Description: People with this special characteristic could be considered geniuses to others, and themselves. They can easly pick up on skills, such as ninjutsu, medical jutsu, and elements very simply. Their IQ was tested to be up to 190 - 210, and nothing less than 190. The average IQ is about 100. Although, people like Alekzaunder, who have read almost every book in both Konoha and Kumogakure's library, have a very high intelligence such as the IQ of 205 or so. Open: -
Public ProfileName: Alekzaunder Haidenissui Appearance: Long red hair, auburn eye, eyepatch on right eye, strong build, glasses, various uniforms. Village: Kumogakure Organization: - Rank: B/Chuunin Age: 21 Info: N/A
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| | | Kiyoshi
Posts : 583 Join date : 2010-04-15 Age : 31
| Subject: Re: Alekzaunder Haidenissui [Chuunin | Kumogakure] Mon Jul 26, 2010 8:52 pm | |
| You need to lose a specialty and 3 special characteristics | |
| | | Alekzaunder Jounin
Posts : 195 Join date : 2010-04-25
| Subject: Re: Alekzaunder Haidenissui [Chuunin | Kumogakure] Mon Jul 26, 2010 9:00 pm | |
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| | | Kiyoshi
Posts : 583 Join date : 2010-04-15 Age : 31
| Subject: Re: Alekzaunder Haidenissui [Chuunin | Kumogakure] Mon Jul 26, 2010 9:05 pm | |
| - Quote :
- You need to lose a specialty
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| | | Alekzaunder Jounin
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| Subject: Re: Alekzaunder Haidenissui [Chuunin | Kumogakure] Mon Jul 26, 2010 9:20 pm | |
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| | | Kiyoshi
Posts : 583 Join date : 2010-04-15 Age : 31
| Subject: Re: Alekzaunder Haidenissui [Chuunin | Kumogakure] Mon Jul 26, 2010 9:22 pm | |
| Now, Raikage approval needed | |
| | | Saint Akatsuki
Posts : 272 Join date : 2010-04-20
| Subject: Re: Alekzaunder Haidenissui [Chuunin | Kumogakure] Mon Jul 26, 2010 9:44 pm | |
| Wanted to point out that
1) Jounin in Kumo is full. Youll have to apply for a different rank. 2) That SC you have for "raiton Kaika" is in fact not a kaika. It is a technique similar to Zaku's wind tunnel usage. This belongs in jutsu creation as a multi-layered technique or something to that effect. Kaika is much more advanced then that and is something you would have to pick up in some way from a member of the Shikyo clan, as it is a creation of theirs. Also being that OOC wise, it is GN (riku)'s creation, you would have to get his permission for its use via PM or PC in the chat box. I know he hasnt given you that permission, so this needs to be removed or permission gotten and better understanding of it obtained. | |
| | | Alekzaunder Jounin
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| Subject: Re: Alekzaunder Haidenissui [Chuunin | Kumogakure] Mon Jul 26, 2010 9:59 pm | |
| 1. Made him a Chuunin 2. Changed the word to Manipulation so dont throw a hissy fit ;D Cause obviously, Kaika is JUST for Shikyo, but I can manipulate the lightning from my surgical proceedure. | |
| | | Saint Akatsuki
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| Subject: Re: Alekzaunder Haidenissui [Chuunin | Kumogakure] Mon Jul 26, 2010 10:04 pm | |
| THe special charactistic needs a display of how much chakra to how much lightning created. For example
D- (insert power and amount and effects it can cause/things it can be used for here) C-(insert power and amount and effects it can cause/things it can be used for here) B-(insert power and amount and effects it can cause/things it can be used for here) A-(insert power and amount and effects it can cause/things it can be used for here) S-(insert power and amount and effects it can cause/things it can be used for here)
This is to prevent it from being abused and used in a god mod like way. For everyones benefit including your own. | |
| | | Alekzaunder Jounin
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| Subject: Re: Alekzaunder Haidenissui [Chuunin | Kumogakure] Mon Jul 26, 2010 10:16 pm | |
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| | | Alekzaunder Jounin
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| Subject: Re: Alekzaunder Haidenissui [Chuunin | Kumogakure] Wed Jul 28, 2010 3:45 pm | |
| Bump for Kaji's approval. | |
| | | Saint Akatsuki
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| Subject: Re: Alekzaunder Haidenissui [Chuunin | Kumogakure] Wed Jul 28, 2010 4:03 pm | |
| You will have to remove either sensor or your Custom SC as the preapproved ones have been ranked and both of these SC are of the A rank. Your character may only start with one A rank SC. You will have to train for the other one. | |
| | | Alekzaunder Jounin
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| Subject: Re: Alekzaunder Haidenissui [Chuunin | Kumogakure] Wed Jul 28, 2010 4:11 pm | |
| Could I remove Elemental instead? | |
| | | Saint Akatsuki
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| Subject: Re: Alekzaunder Haidenissui [Chuunin | Kumogakure] Wed Jul 28, 2010 4:16 pm | |
| No. Elemental is only B ranked and so would still leave you with two A ranked. You can ONLY START WITH ONE A RANKED SPECIAL CHARACTERISTIC AT YOUR RANK. The only two you have are Sensor and your custom. Even if Elemental was A ranked and had three A ranked ones, then you would be required to remove two out of those three. Sensor or your custom, one of them has to go. I would stongly suggest changing your custom to C or B ranked and only the physical alteration and then making jutsu which allows you to use the phsyical alteration in battle with your lightning chakra. which as I expressed before, it falls under that category more anyway as your altercations are simply like Zaku's which still required specific jutsu to use. | |
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| Subject: Re: Alekzaunder Haidenissui [Chuunin | Kumogakure] Wed Jul 28, 2010 4:49 pm | |
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| | | Shikyo Riku Admin
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| Subject: Re: Alekzaunder Haidenissui [Chuunin | Kumogakure] Wed Jul 28, 2010 10:45 pm | |
| approved unless said otherwise. Second approval by the Raikage | |
| | | Alekzaunder Jounin
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| Subject: Re: Alekzaunder Haidenissui [Chuunin | Kumogakure] Thu Jul 29, 2010 2:39 pm | |
| Bump for Kaji's approval. | |
| | | Alekzaunder Jounin
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| Subject: Re: Alekzaunder Haidenissui [Chuunin | Kumogakure] Fri Jul 30, 2010 11:32 pm | |
| Bump for Kaji's approval. | |
| | | Alekzaunder Jounin
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| Subject: Re: Alekzaunder Haidenissui [Chuunin | Kumogakure] Sat Jul 31, 2010 4:09 pm | |
| Bump for Kaji's approval. | |
| | | Kaji Kanto
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| Subject: Re: Alekzaunder Haidenissui [Chuunin | Kumogakure] Sun Aug 01, 2010 5:35 pm | |
| Denied, History is too fucked up to be approved.... - Quote :
- His mother had gotten a job once more as the medical nurse in Kumo and his father didnt have a job as a shinobi just yet. So whilst his mother was away, Alekzaunder's father began to teach the young boy about his bloodline and clan. Alekzaunder picked up very quickly on the arts of his bloodline ability; to be able to fuse water and lightning elements together to make Hydro Electricity. Of course, his first element was Lightning, in which he picked up easly on shooting simple lightning bolts. His second element was water, which was a tough one for him. He had to focus his chakra in his hands with his hands in water. This helped Alekz to freely control the water in his hands.
I'll stop here just to show how fucked up it is since its from the ages 5-10 and even before the academy..... Denied unless completely revamped ^.^ | |
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| Subject: Re: Alekzaunder Haidenissui [Chuunin | Kumogakure] Sun Aug 01, 2010 6:11 pm | |
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| | | Caranore Missing Nin
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| Subject: Re: Alekzaunder Haidenissui [Chuunin | Kumogakure] Mon Aug 09, 2010 8:58 am | |
| Ok. First, the history. If the parents are civilians, they arent ninjas. Meaning the mother is a normal medic, and the father doesnt go out on missions and fight without BEING a ninja. Civilian is either retired with no intention of going back, or not a ninja in general.
Second. The clan needs to be made and since I alreeady commented on your Hydroelectric jutsu, the clan will most likely need to be revamped. However I will let GN make that decision.
GN will need to look over this application again as he is the new Raikage and then I will review it a second time to see if I missed anything. | |
| | | Shikyo Riku Admin
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| Subject: Re: Alekzaunder Haidenissui [Chuunin | Kumogakure] Thu Oct 14, 2010 6:16 am | |
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| | | Alekzaunder Jounin
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| Subject: Re: Alekzaunder Haidenissui [Chuunin | Kumogakure] Fri Oct 15, 2010 2:46 pm | |
| Unarchive please? (has edited the characters history a while back) | |
| | | Kiyoshi
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| Subject: Re: Alekzaunder Haidenissui [Chuunin | Kumogakure] Thu Nov 04, 2010 5:11 am | |
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