Spanky Finished

Posts : 41 Join date : 2010-06-16

Name: Luutiont Sykes
Nickname/Alias:SPANKY

Age: 15
Age Appearance: 17

Appearance[/bGender:Male

[b]Skill Level: D
Ninja Rank: Academy student

Village: Konoha
Birthplace: Takigakure:
Previous Village: None

Clan/Bloodline: Sykes Clan

Personality: Spanky is usually calm and cool but he dose not like it when people talk wrong to him or disrespect him, even a team mate could set him off. But even if he is angry he can still pull it together to finish a mission when needed. He is usually not very polite to guys but he is very nice to girls and is very good at picking them up, picking up girls is pretty much a hobby for him. He refuses to hit girls even if they make him angry. When he is pissed off his eyes water making it look like hes crying and if someone says something like "Look hes crying" it will just make him snap and go crazy.

Goals: None
Alignment: Good

Canon Personality:

Skill Specialty:
Dominant:Fuuinjutsu
Recessive:
Elemental Affinity:
Dominant:Raiton
Recessive:

History:Spanky was very nerdy his first years going through the ninja academy. He didn't care about meeting new people, making friends or talking to girls. All he cared about was his study's he had straight A's. He practiced his kenjutus almost everyday instead of going out and having fun. His parents where always proud of him and telling him how smart he was. But eventual he got tired of being a goody goody and doing the same routine every single day over and over again. So eventual he started falling behind on his study talking to all of the girls and making a few friends.

Buy the time he became a genin he had the girls all over him and he pretty much everyone in his school. But somehow he still had the best grades in all of his classes. all though it looked like he was becoming a new person he still cared about his study's and his training. When Spanky turned 13 he started taking an interest in fuuinjutsu. In his spare time when he wasn't at school or hanging out with friends he would read books on fuuinjutsu, Because he didn't have a proper teacher he had to rely on books and conduct experiments by himself. He started practicing creating small seals. He started off by creating seals to seal small things like kunai or drinking water. He decided to not take his study's in fuuinjutsu to the next level without a proper teacher.

This brings Spanky to where we are now.
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Special Characteristics:

Public Profile
Name:Spanky
Appearance: Spanky Finished Oli_sykes

Village: Konoha
Organization: N/A
Rank: Genin
Age: 15
Info: Spanky is very skilled with kenjutsu and looks as if he is just a child doing child things like slacking off or playing hooky. But he is actual very smart and keeps up with his study's. He is very good with the lady's and has a short temper. He doesn't like it when people talk down to him or disrespect him. His real name is Luutiont but he prefers to be called Spanky.

Jounin Posts : 178 Join date : 2010-04-19 Age : 32

ummm...I may be on break, but I can see you have a lot of grammar problems just by glancing at this. Please fix those. Use spell checker if you must.

Also, you have mist as your village, and as of now, that village is closed. And lastly, I'm not sure if this is a rule, but I think its better to use picture that looks like an anime character.

Posts : 41 Join date : 2010-06-16

my grammar was so bad in this because i kind of did it in school when i was supposed to be doing a report so yeah i will fix that and if so i would like to keep this appearance but i can look into a new picture if needed and is mist the only village closed right now because if not i would like to know my options

Missing Nin Posts : 436 Join date : 2010-04-13

Not only that but there is no Kirigakure. That much should be obvious by the two groups.

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Jounin Posts : 178 Join date : 2010-04-19 Age : 32

Suna is not open. Konoha and Kumo only

Subject: Re: Spanky Finished Fri Oct 29, 2010 11:39 pm

Fix the Coding.
Your Skill level would be D while your Ninja rank would be Genin.
One Specialty only at D rank

Posts : 41 Join date : 2010-06-16

K fixed my village and skill level

Subject: Re: Spanky Finished Sat Oct 30, 2010 1:03 pm

lifeanddeath wrote:: One Specialty only at D rank

Posts : 41 Join date : 2010-06-16

oh sry didn't see that i fixed it

Missing Nin Posts : 436 Join date : 2010-04-13

Village: Kohana = Konoha, not Kohana.

Posts : 41 Join date : 2010-06-16

fail on my part lol

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Jounin Posts : 178 Join date : 2010-04-19 Age : 32

Luutiont wrote:: Skill Specialty:
Dominant:Fuuinjutsu
Recessive:Kenjutsu
Elemental Affinity:
Dominant:Raiton
Recessive: Doton

Genin may only have one Element and One Skill at D rank

Posts : 41 Join date : 2010-06-16

yeah i know but i didn't know if you wanted me to list it here for later reference

Jounin Posts : 178 Join date : 2010-04-19 Age : 32

Remove one from each, they can be added later.

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Jounin Posts : 178 Join date : 2010-04-19 Age : 32

One last thing for me. Reread your History and Personality, it doesn't all make sense.

Posts : 41 Join date : 2010-06-16

im kind of not the best at creating history's do you have any tips on how to fix it up?

Jounin Posts : 178 Join date : 2010-04-19 Age : 32

you need to reread it. It's grammar problems mostly. That will be something you need to work on.

Posts : 41 Join date : 2010-06-16

hows that

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Jounin Posts : 178 Join date : 2010-04-19 Age : 32

*sighs* Nothing has changed. I don't want to go in and help you fix your problems.

I guess it can be fixed in time. However, change your rank to Academy Student.

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Jounin Posts : 178 Join date : 2010-04-19 Age : 32

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