Katsuyu Nami's Jutsu FINISHED

Akatsuki Posts : 14 Join date : 2010-06-01

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Akatsuki Posts : 14 Join date : 2010-06-01

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Subject: Re: Katsuyu Nami's Jutsu FINISHED Mon Jun 21, 2010 12:04 pm

Suiton Poison Water Shot wrote:: This jutsu utilizes the water element. After a string of hand signs Nami can shoot water form his mouth. The water is in a jelly form and is combined with Nami's poison. The poison comes out in spheres the size of baseballs. The poison is very sticky and hard to get off. If it is inhaled, or gets in the blood stream it cause paralysis and extreme pain in the target. If it is just on the skin it causes extreme pain and burning.

A few questions is all. The range of this technique, and how badly the burns get.

Giant Water Slug Technique wrote:: This jutsu utilizes the water element. After performing the needed handsigns Nami creates a giant water slug around him. The slug is made of water and is huge. Nami sits in the middle of it controlling it. The slug can cause concussive damage as well as drown his opponents.

Mmmk, how big is this slug, how fast does it move, what's it range, rank the damage done by the slug, and are you more vulnerable to raiton techniques?

Hiding Slug Technique wrote:: This jutsu can only be performed by the members of the Katsuyu clan. After performing the needed handsigns Nami can become a slug. Katsuyu uses his chakra and his half slug body to change his shape into a slug of any size. The slug cant be taller then him but can become the size of a regular slug. This is mostly used for spying as he can sneak up in this form without being noticed. When he is in this form he can also shrink his chakra so he can be relativley un-noticed. If he is ever harmed in this state he instantly reverts back to his normal state.

Can you still utilize techniques in this form? Speed/strength/etc, still the same as if you were in your human body or is it reduced/strengthened?

Creation Guide & Template - The Elements wrote:: If you have a recessive element, the rank for the recessive jutsu may not exceed B Rank. These count for elemental jutsu only.

Doton • Yomi Numa, scrap it. As a recessive element you can only utilize up to a B Rank Doton technique.

Also, regarding your jutsus that utilize poison in it, does the poison last throughout the fight, or does it gradually wear off or only last for a certain amount of posts? Please clarify this.

Akatsuki Posts : 14 Join date : 2010-06-01

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Subject: Re: Katsuyu Nami's Jutsu FINISHED Mon Jun 21, 2010 7:19 pm

Everything looks okay save for Giant Slug Technique.

Reduce the range of your attacks, limit the time you spend in your slug / how long does the slug last, reduce your height, and add chakra drains to each additional post you remain in said form.

Akatsuki Posts : 14 Join date : 2010-06-01

Alright i took ten feat off the height, halved the range, gave it a time limit of 10 posts and added a C rank drain of chakra every post.
I hope its fine but if you need more reductions i understand

Subject: Re: Katsuyu Nami's Jutsu FINISHED Tue Jun 22, 2010 11:20 am

Just a few more things:
-How do you survive inside of the slug since it is water?
-The size is alright... although its unlikely you'll be able to last very long it/keep it up due to its size (because you'll need a large water source to begin with and need to maintain said water source).

Akatsuki Posts : 14 Join date : 2010-06-01

Well Nami's clan abilities allow him to stay underwater for extended periods of time.

I made the limit 7 posts and i also added that there needs to be a large source of water avaliable.

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Subject: Re: Katsuyu Nami's Jutsu FINISHED Tue Jun 22, 2010 4:39 pm

Ahh right I forgot about that.

Well then... Approved unless said otherwise...

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