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PostSubject: Alekzaunder's Jutsu    Alekzaunder's Jutsu  I_icon_minitimeWed Jul 28, 2010 5:15 pm

Lightning:
Spoiler:

Medical:
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Suiton:
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HydroElectric Ninjutsu:
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Other:
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PostSubject: Re: Alekzaunder's Jutsu    Alekzaunder's Jutsu  I_icon_minitimeSat Jul 31, 2010 10:20 pm

Completed and ready for approval.
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PostSubject: Re: Alekzaunder's Jutsu    Alekzaunder's Jutsu  I_icon_minitimeSun Aug 01, 2010 2:36 pm

Bump.
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PostSubject: Re: Alekzaunder's Jutsu    Alekzaunder's Jutsu  I_icon_minitimeSun Aug 01, 2010 5:41 pm

Before I start modding your jutsu, Im going to note that you have 11 A ranked jutsu while Chuunin are only allowed a maximum of 2, please remove 9 of them.

Also, Silent Homicide is banned to my knowledge and all jutsu have ranks, please add in ranks for all of your jutsu.
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PostSubject: Re: Alekzaunder's Jutsu    Alekzaunder's Jutsu  I_icon_minitimeSun Aug 01, 2010 5:49 pm

Done.
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PostSubject: Re: Alekzaunder's Jutsu    Alekzaunder's Jutsu  I_icon_minitimeSun Aug 01, 2010 6:04 pm

Raigen Raikouchuu - Lightning Illusion Lightning Flash Pillar - I belive that is A ranked though you can check with someone else because Im not entirely sure

I also forgot to state that Chidori & all variations are exclusive only to a select few, which have already been chosen so you'll have to remove Chidori Senbon.
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PostSubject: Re: Alekzaunder's Jutsu    Alekzaunder's Jutsu  I_icon_minitimeSun Aug 01, 2010 6:07 pm

The rank for - Lightning Illusion Lightning Flash Pillar is unknown.
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PostSubject: Re: Alekzaunder's Jutsu    Alekzaunder's Jutsu  I_icon_minitimeSun Aug 01, 2010 6:08 pm

I removed Chidori Senbon.

I checked LeafNinja and the Lightning Illusion is ranked unknown. You or anyone else are probably guessing at the ranks so I gave it one since its a simple flash of light that temporarily blinds the enemy. :l
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PostSubject: Re: Alekzaunder's Jutsu    Alekzaunder's Jutsu  I_icon_minitimeSun Aug 01, 2010 6:49 pm

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Name of Jutsu: Blood Transfusion
Rank: B
Users: -
Type of Jutsu:: Medical
Element Affinity: -

Description: Loss of blood is a serious condition, and not very uncommon one in the shinobi battlefield. When a person reaches such a dangerous state, a medical nin can ease their symptoms by using this jutsu. First, the user must open up a small cut in the patient's body in order to open a vein. Once a vein has been opened, the medical nin uses chakra in order to increase the density of the patient's blood. Thus, they won't get more blood, but more red and white blood cells are created, an effect which helps fight against the ailments and symptoms of losing blood. However, this jutsu has a downside which is the fact that the user's own blood dilutes as long as the jutsu is activated, which means that basically it is indeed a blood transfusion and the user must be careful at how much blood he or she gives to their patients.

This jutsu seems to be going towards A/S ranked difficulty, more towards A ranked in my opinion.

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Name of Jutsu: Bone Healer Skill
Rank: C
Users: -
Type of Jutsu:: Medical
Element Affinity: -

Description: When an ally has broken or fractured a bone, this jutsu uses chakra which makes the body boost its calcium level. Using the extra calcium the user already has the calcium to work with, but will only work on bone tissue. This allows the bone to heal more rapidly than it would with a normal cast on for months.
You need to add in how long it takes for the bone to fully heal/to fully preform the technique


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Name of Jutsu: Numbing Technique
Rank: C
Users: -
Type of Jutsu:: Medical
Element Affinity: -

Description: Numbing technique is a jutsu used by medical ninja. This technique allows the ninja to numb the selected limb with their charged hands. This is can be used for either battle, or for medical purposes. It is a basic, but skillful technique known to many medical ninja.
This doesn't seem like a jutsu to be used for battle purposes because the difficulty of performing it in the heat of battle would cause the rank to go up a considerably high amount.

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Name of Jutsu: Basic Battle Healing
Rank: C
Users: -
Type of Jutsu:: Medical
Element Affinity: -

Description: Using this technique, the user is able to heal small battle wounds during a battle in order to stop infections, bleeding, and it closes any cuts. Although when using this technique, the user is open to any attacks.

Add in how long it takes to complete/that you're open for attack




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PostSubject: Re: Alekzaunder's Jutsu    Alekzaunder's Jutsu  I_icon_minitimeSun Aug 01, 2010 6:59 pm

Kiyoshi wrote:
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Name of Jutsu: Blood Transfusion
Rank: B
Users: -
Type of Jutsu:: Medical
Element Affinity: -

Description: Loss of blood is a serious condition, and not very uncommon one in the shinobi battlefield. When a person reaches such a dangerous state, a medical nin can ease their symptoms by using this jutsu. First, the user must open up a small cut in the patient's body in order to open a vein. Once a vein has been opened, the medical nin uses chakra in order to increase the density of the patient's blood. Thus, they won't get more blood, but more red and white blood cells are created, an effect which helps fight against the ailments and symptoms of losing blood. However, this jutsu has a downside which is the fact that the user's own blood dilutes as long as the jutsu is activated, which means that basically it is indeed a blood transfusion and the user must be careful at how much blood he or she gives to their patients.

I ranked it B because of how I have medical as my skill specialty, and the knowledge and usage of my medical abilities.

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Name of Jutsu: Bone Healer Skill
Rank: C
Users: -
Type of Jutsu:: Medical
Element Affinity: -

Description: When an ally has broken or fractured a bone, this jutsu uses chakra which makes the body boost its calcium level. Using the extra calcium the user already has the calcium to work with, but will only work on bone tissue. This allows the bone to heal more rapidly than it would with a normal cast on for months. It takes atleast 10 minutes IC for the ally's bone to begin healing. It takes the bone IC 1-2 days for the bone to completely heal due to the rapid calcium boost.



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Name of Jutsu: Numbing Technique
Rank: C
Users: -
Type of Jutsu:: Medical
Element Affinity: -

Description: Numbing technique is a jutsu used by medical ninja. This technique allows the ninja to numb the selected limb with their charged hands. It is a basic, but skillful technique known to many medical ninja.

Changed the description to not be used in battle.

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Name of Jutsu: Basic Battle Healing
Rank: C
Users: -
Type of Jutsu:: Medical
Element Affinity: -

Description: Using this technique, the user is able to heal small battle wounds during a battle in order to stop infections, bleeding, and it closes any cuts. Although when using this technique, the user is open to any attacks. It takes about 10 seconds in IC to complete this action, and the user is not able to use any jutsu for those seconds that the user is healing himself or others.






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PostSubject: Re: Alekzaunder's Jutsu    Alekzaunder's Jutsu  I_icon_minitimeTue Aug 03, 2010 2:35 am

You need to change your time frames to posts (Or at least add on the posts it takes)
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PostSubject: Re: Alekzaunder's Jutsu    Alekzaunder's Jutsu  I_icon_minitimeTue Aug 03, 2010 8:21 am

Edited.
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PostSubject: Re: Alekzaunder's Jutsu    Alekzaunder's Jutsu  I_icon_minitimeThu Aug 05, 2010 8:27 am

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PostSubject: Re: Alekzaunder's Jutsu    Alekzaunder's Jutsu  I_icon_minitimeFri Aug 06, 2010 4:58 pm

Quote :
Name of Jutsu: Bone Healer Skill
Rank: C
Users: -
Type of Jutsu:: Medical
Element Affinity: -

Description: When an ally has broken or fractured a bone, this jutsu uses chakra which makes the body boost its calcium level. Using the extra calcium the user already has the calcium to work with, but will only work on bone tissue. This allows the bone to heal more rapidly than it would with a normal cast on for months. It takes atleast two posts for the ally's bone to begin healing. It takes the bone IC 1-2 days (Roleplay it out) for the bone to completely heal due to the rapid calcium boost.

Make it B rank and it'll be fine

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Name of Jutsu: Bandage Skill
Rank: D
Users: -
Type of Jutsu:: Ninjutsu + Medical
Element Affinity: -

Description: One of the first techniques that a Medical Ninja must learn. Reasons why is because these techniques are what matters between life and death. This is a special type of technique in which a medical ninja is capable of making bandages by using their surroundings such as grass, cloth, cotton, and others with the help of using chakra.

Name of Jutsu: Oxygen Supply
Rank: D
Users: -
Type of Jutsu:: Medical
Element Affinity: -

Description: An easy justu for the Medical Ninja. A ninja uses chakra upon the chest area focusing it to help the body in some ways. It helps the lungs expand easier making the chest and neck muscles become more officient which allows the airways to expand and pulmonary blood vessels so then the cells of the body may breathe easier.

Also make these C ranked
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PostSubject: Re: Alekzaunder's Jutsu    Alekzaunder's Jutsu  I_icon_minitimeFri Aug 06, 2010 7:23 pm

Done.
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PostSubject: Re: Alekzaunder's Jutsu    Alekzaunder's Jutsu  I_icon_minitimeMon Aug 09, 2010 8:39 am

HydroElectric Jutsu are essentially Ranton Jutsu, an element that has been claimed by Kaji's Kanto Clan. (Ranton = Storm Element). While yes, water and lightning can be used in conjuncture, the way they are being manipulated at the moment is too close to Ranton to be allowed.
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PostSubject: Re: Alekzaunder's Jutsu    Alekzaunder's Jutsu  I_icon_minitimeMon Oct 11, 2010 7:57 pm

It's been two months so something has to be done here
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PostSubject: Re: Alekzaunder's Jutsu    Alekzaunder's Jutsu  I_icon_minitimeMon Oct 11, 2010 10:13 pm

Sorry these past two months have been really busy and stressful for me due to the fact that Band is running my life with 4 hour long practices and all night Football games >->
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PostSubject: Re: Alekzaunder's Jutsu    Alekzaunder's Jutsu  I_icon_minitimeThu Oct 14, 2010 6:14 am

Still gonna archive it.
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PostSubject: Re: Alekzaunder's Jutsu    Alekzaunder's Jutsu  I_icon_minitimeFri Oct 15, 2010 2:48 pm

Unarchive please. Im not sure what you want me to do with the raiton + suiton jutsu because it seems completely fine to me.
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